- Add some found footage at the start of a city scene – moving in on a car park (Ariel shot)
- Re-shot the car park ceiling (needs more light)
- Have parallel scenes of what the boy was doing – use the pulse transition with jump cuts x2
- POV shots
- Over the shoulder shot (Attempt a whip pan)
- More close ups
- More interesting than the last opening
Sunday, 21 February 2016
Feedback for Draft 2
We got a target audience together and showed them our second draft to recieve feedback to then make further improvements:
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