Audience Research of Opening Sequence

We showed our first draft to a target audience who gave us some feedback;

• Titles were to quick and needed to change position around the video, maybe coming from different angles to fit the screen.
• Find a different font for the titles to match the genre better and the one used is distracting
• It takes too long for something to happen 
• Boring
• Don't show the face of the boy, he doesn't look threatening 
• Include more genre conventions
• Use different sounds
• Add ambient sounds
• Use transitions (blink)
• Add more footage thatis different - don't just follow the girl around